The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Wow, this is really good!
Beautiful...
07/13/07
Oh my. I'd like to send this to my nephew who has to "process" the fallen soldiers in Iraq. Just this week, he has experienced pain like this. Your poem is beautiful.
07/13/07
Wow - great images here - well done!
07/14/07
"Confidant" was there, but I guess I overlooked the topic word of confident amongst the beautiful, heartfelt words. Nicely done!
Beautiful poem! I believe you did a wonderful job of showing, rather than talking about, confidence.
07/17/07
Just beautiful. Very moving and lovely.
07/18/07
Oh I just love this. Everything a poem should be. Very well done!
07/18/07
This poetry not only proclaims confident assurance, but heart and hope as well as encouragement. I get a sense of real "meat" in your words, something tough to chew on for awhile, but full of nourishment for one's soul. I am impressed.
Very nice!
A poem meant to be set to music. Good allegories and great message.
This very visual poem presents a most challenging message.
07/18/07
Wow. I could see him and feel him. Well done!
Wow! This is 'beyond' nice. It's wonderful. So much packed into it. Descriptions were more as emotions that tied everything together. Good job!