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Topic: Reading (01/25/07)
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TITLE: Marion, the librarian | Previous Challenge Entry
By dub W
01/25/07 -
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Sat upon a stool
Her book was so aptly open
From her reading pool.
Marion, the librarian
Worked from dusk to dawn
Hushing little boys and girls, shhhh
Mary, Chris, and Sean.
Marion, the librarian
Picked out books for all
According to their special needs
At least, what she saw.
Marion, the librarian
Puffed the dust bunnies
Then she laughed at her dusty nose
Smiling so sunny.
Marion, the librarian
Closed up every night
No reading in the library
It was dark, no light.
Marion, the librarian
Got home half past eight
Ordered pizza for the night
Reading while she ate.
Marion, the librarian
Opened up the door
And put her books upon the desk
Her purse on the floor.
Marion, the librarian
Wiped a tear away
A pizza stain was all she saw
Fine without delay.
Marion, the librarian
A dollar and dime
She pulled from her purse down below
To pay for her dine.
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Marion, the librarian
Got home half past eight
Ordered pizza for the night
Reading while she ate.
Nice poem, Dub. I quit trying to write it myself, so i can't comment on the mechanics. But, I loved the character development and got a sense of her being. You created an honest picture. Would love to see Marion used in story form. God bless.
Am I missing something in this poem of no meaning? ;)
Great exercise.
Your poem made me smile, for which I thank you kindly! :)