The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful writing,
A prayer in time was quite inspirational.Well done.
Wow! I'm stunned by this...what a wonderful, unique, creative...well, just awesome story.
Wow -this was cool - very unique. I liked it a lot!
Good work. I liked the description about the young girl who's pregnant and struggling with choices in her life. Very realistic and artistically worded. Praise God!
Wow! This is really good! Really, really good! Great writing!
I ran across your name and comments on some of my early entries here at faithwriters (thank you so much!) and came calling at your member page. Sorry to say, I find that I hadn't returned the favor in commenting on any of your stories. I also notice you have been away from FW for a year---you write so well that I hope this means you have been busy getting a book ready for publishing!

Anyway, after reading many of your WC stories, I must comment. This story is like a Christian version of "The Twilight Zone." I love it! Such a creative imagination you have, and you made the pregnant teen so real.

I hope to see your name back in the weekly challenge in the near future. God bless you with all of the best of His best!