The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your unique take on this topic, tying into the power of intercession. Good job!
This is a powerful piece. You did a fine job of developing the characters and showing the conflicts in such a clear way. I noticed some tiny comma errors--one that was needed when and separated two complete clauses and one after the word that. If the word was which, then it would be a comma. There's a great rule about the difference between that and which.
Those are tiny things though. You did a fine job of writing on topic while delivering a powerful message. I really enjoyed the ending. It brought peace to my heart. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!