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TITLE: I Commune | Previous Challenge Entry
By dub W
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
reaching to the sky with ample fingers, wooded fingers.
Mysteries of God’s creation sealed within the casings.
The stark winter haze provides yet another contrast
to the sight of Christ in God’s house reining beyond the heaven.
Who cries for Jesus in these cold harsh days?
Who reaches on the highest to praise his name?
Who courts the tiniest ballerina?
Who stands erect joyously dancing?
Dancing to the rhythm of the Gods heavenly choir.
Plaid pipe men cannot come near to music played in God’s honor.
The bands of the earth bound are but strange noise.
Hear the trumpet, the tree, the tambourine all in concert.
Their extended fingers playing the wind’s harp
calling the Master’s violin to join the recital
Find an angel and ask for a name, beg angelic attention
Man is but fodder in their sight, a parasite, so temporary.
No one knows how to address their highness
but, Angels know, as does Jesus, God in His realm
Oh, fall on your knees ye pallid faces.
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Anyway - I guess Jesus, Creation and Angels have the inimate knowledge on how to address God, man falls short in comparison, by his attempts. (?)
Interesting to think upon! :)
In s.1., did you mean "reigning?"
And I find the 4th stanza very compelling--an angels' view of heaven. But the last line puzzles me: how do "faces" fall on their knees?
I'll return to this poem; it's one to read slowly and to savor, like a hard butterscotch candy. Masterful use of poetic language.