The Official Writing Challenge
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I have not clue about "poetic timing" I just know that I loved this. It was an excellent read.

God bless~
Praise God for His poetic grace filling your heart. This is so beautiful. Time to pray indeed. Thank you for His loveliness.
The rhythm and pace of this is fantastic. I love how it unfolds in an almost hypnotic style.

I don't know much about the technicality of poetry, either, but I love this piece. Awesome job, in my opinion!
Congratulations! I am beyond happy for you my friend!

God bless~
This is truly beautiful! The rhythm almost felt like breathing. Congratulations on your EC!
This is an absolutely beautiful and precious poem. Very well deserving of its EC place - many congrats
One of the most beautiful poems I've ever read! Congratulations on your well earned win.
Oh this was lovely to roll though my mind and off my tongue.

Congratulations on your level win and 2nd place overall Mar!