The Official Writing Challenge
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An endearing entry that touched my heart. Well done.
I really enjoyed it. Thanks!

God bless~
What a sweet story. I like the strong dialogue. Good use of this week's topic. Well done.
You put an interesting, creative twist to your writing. This is what makes stories good to read and hard to put down until the end.

You did it mostly by conversation. More descriptive words and emotions shown in words will also help.

Keep it going.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 24 overall! Happy Dance!