The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fine Villanelle. Loved every line of it. What a joy to read. Very well done!
I like the repeating words. It's almost like a song.
I'm not sure of the concept though, because It's different than I understood the verse to mean. Maybe it's just the way I'm reading it.
Actually, I like poems that make me think... that make me read them over again to understand the meaning between the lines.
This poem definitely goes deep. It begins and ends very well, for an excellent message.

A couple places were a little confusing at first, but after rereading it, I understood what you meant. The notes at the bottom are much appreciated.
A deeply prolific poem that I truly embraced.

God bless~
Wow! Wow! Wow! How fantastic. I just looked up the definition of Villanelle and you followed the description perfectly.

Congratulations on a scrupulous entry!!
Congratulations on ranking 27 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)