The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/14
Reflective and pensive piece with a great message at the conclusion. Excellent job.

God bless~
01/14/14
Tis is a good mother. Very nice job. Thank you.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 35 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)
Beautiful story written from a soul who seems to know what the hard stuff in life is all about. Thank you for giving me a glimpse of the grace and mercy of Jesus.

The story contained much emotion but took the reader from despair, in the beginning, to hope and courage in the final sentences. Nice job, Andrea!