The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice! I thought your descriptions were very good. I would have a hard time writing this topic this way but you did it great.
A beautiful description of what salvation means. This story is for more eyes than ours. Send out a few queries and see where you get with this one.
I've tried to imagine the shame of those moments when the charges are being read - and you've captured it perfectly! I think your story contradicts your title, though. But I REALLY liked the story!
Breathtaking! Great flow, very emotional as well as truthful. I loved this. The ending added a special punch! :-)
Touching article and a poem to finish it off. Nicely done.
Yes! A great treatment of that amazing moment when everything hangs in the balance and then the change! Loved this: bathed in this sacred milieu of light.' Thanks, Yeggy
You reminded me that we are in filthy rags, and your story touched me. Beautifully described...and fulfilling to the reader.
I love this. Bravo! The emotion of your character, averting her eyes, knowing she's unworthy, yet being welcomed with a kiss and the truth--I died so I could be with you.