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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Drip (04/25/13)
......................................... A
....................................... subtle
..................................... insidious
................................... virulent drip
................................. fearing rebuttal
.............................. the church, let it slip
…........................ through the door where it
…..................... leached out profane ideologies
..................... vain human reasoning, man made
................... psychologies, spreading, like poison
.................. refilling the void, of an absentee God
….............. with the mantra of Freud. Lust, pride &
….............. vanity gushed like a steam, as this new
….............. Christianity, preached self esteem - out
…............... went humility meekness and lowliness
…................... gone were the sermons on biblical
…..................... holiness, narcissism, solipsism
…...................... spread through the herd, yet
.............................. they welcomed the lie
…................................ never uttered
…...........,......................... a word



…........................................the
…..................................... silence
….................................... prevailed
…................................... as the wise
….................................. became fools
…................................ and brainwashed
….............................. the innocent children
…............................ in schools - where they
…......................... taught evolution and called
…....................... evil good, this noxious solution
….................... spread forth like a flood and imbued
…................. and polluted their trusting young minds
…............... deceiving, corrupting and leaving them blind
…......... to the truth of the lie, to the subtle subversion, of
secular-based, humanistic perversion! ... This horrible torrent brought moral distortion, no longer abhorrent were things like abortion, where hospitals slaughter the young and the weak, yet Christians stay silent, refusing to speak ... and the 'me' generation, devoid of perception, drunk
... with self love from this flood of deception, a deluge of evil and gross impropriety, lustful delusion, engulfing society, dumbed down and bound up in a wilful complicity, puffed up in pride, oozing egocentricity, sodomy,
.....murder, perversions are rife, as we drown in this
............................blasphemous, cesspool of life


Beware lest any man spoil you through philosophy and vain deceit, after the tradition of men, after the rudiments of the world, and not after Christ.
Colossians 2:8 KJV
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Virgil Youngblood 
05/03/13
Wow! Creative, insightful, powerfully written. Excellent in every way.
lynn gipson 
05/04/13
Double wow. What a creation both in shape and words. Powerful, thought provoking words excellently written!
Cinda Carter 
05/04/13
It is staggering to the point of disbelief. I can only say, WOW, it is right to the point and what an awesome way to express the slow drip of in our society. Excellent in everyway.
Cheryl Harrison
05/04/13
Wow. So true. A little hard to read because of the formatting, but your hard work is obvious. You are a master poet.
Bea Edwards 
05/05/13
Wow I'm speechless at your creativity. Creating this masterpiece qualifies you as a genius in my estimation.
Vince Martella
05/05/13
A symphony to the eyes and ears! I don't often comment on poetry, not being well versed enough ( pun intended), but this was obviously well crafted. The musician in me loved the meter. And the message was sobering. Excellent!
Judith Gayle Smith-Owens Vitouswykegardinerclark
05/05/13
Exquisitely written. My sentiments exactly . . .
Lillian Rhoades 
05/06/13
Wows = What Other Words can be said, except that this reads like a wonderfully, original, rap song.

Stupendous!
John Huckstep
05/09/13
This was great!!! Powerful, truthful words well packaged in a brillant display of black on white. Loved it!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
05/10/13
Wow I'm impressed. That is true art. Congratulations on placing 3 in your level and 11 overall!
Margaret Kearley
07/06/13
Deb, this is SO amazing, I wish I had read it before! It deserves to be widely circulated and I hope you wont mind if I share it a bit! You portray the sobering truth of our society with such powerful clarity. I love your poetry and your rhyming, scanning, word usage here are just wonderful. This has gone straight to my Favourites Box!