The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so lovely the words just flow off the page. You make writing poetry look easy and I know it is anything but. I understand the reasoning of not having more punctuation, but I did feel myself needing to reread a line or two where I think a period or comma would have prevented that, especially in the second stanza. Overall the this is beautiful, the message is stunning. This has so touched my heart.
You conveyed lots in such a short poem. Pretty awesome!
Simply brilliant! I adore this! God bless~