The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. You have such vivid descriptions. The repetition with the slight twist at the end as brilliant. I totally enjoyed this.
Beautoful, descriptive writing. I really liked your punctuation of God's natural beauty with the example of the sunflower stubbornly growing up from the crack surpassing all our human-made and manicured work.
Interesting story, fresh and brilliant in its approach to the topic at hand. I really liked it.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 28 overall!