The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your story. I like all the references to Allison and what she says, and how she turns out to be the MC's daughter. I can imagine this as part of a bigger story. Well done.
Oh, I really enjoyed this entry so much. The dialogue, the meaning between the lines, and the overall writing style.

Thanks. God bless~
Congratulations on first place in EC for your story that moves along just right to touch the reader.
FLAT is a. Eautiful story. Congratulations on your win!
Good story, well written. Congratulations!
Congratulations Michael. This is great writing.
Congratulations, Michael. I love your writing. It's good to be back to FW.
Awesome entry! Congrats, Michael! Well done. God bless!
Congratulations on your winning entry. It was the second time reading it through that your masterful tale was revealed while savoring your words-well done!