The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
This is a powerful piece. You managed to capture the fear and the faith. I was also impressed by your rhythm and your rhymes. Often poetry will go over my head and I'd guess there is much more to this piece than my mind can comprehend. However, I have no doubt that the Holy Spirit will make sure the reader is getting the exact words that she needs to hear. It takes a great deal of talent to do just that.
Touching with beautiful purpose to the meaning.
God bless~
This is so beautiful it almost brought me to tears. It is a most amazing poem – the rhyming, choices of words and scanning are perfect. Far beyond that however, the message is a wonderful telling testimony of every heart that seeks to follow the Saviour closely. It could almost have been written by John Bunyan to lay by the side of his wonderful book, Pilgrim’s Progress. Keep writing poems like this Deb and may they be greatly used by our God for His Glory and blessing.