The Official Writing Challenge
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The message of your poem brought me peace. You might be a little weak in the topic category, but your message of God's love and provision will bless many.
08/17/12
I loved this complex and well written poem. The words you chose touched my heart and made it smile.

Nicely done...Thank you.

God bless~
08/18/12
Very reassuring material, though I feel you could have added more around the feast that is prepared for us when our enemies surround us.
08/18/12
A wonderful tribute to one of my favorite Psalms. Nicely written!
This is lovely. It flows off the tongue in such an elegant way.
08/19/12
I enjoyed your poem and its message. It's really well written. Thanks.