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Wow - This was epic! It pulled me in from the beginning to the very last words.

A most clever account of "the enemy" searching and seducing those away from the "Lord."

I thought this was different, out of the box fresh and so well written.

Thank you. God Bless~
Powerful story! This truly did grab me from the beginning and brought a wonderful journey. The sublte message of devotion to the Lord was clear yet not overstated. Wonderful writing.
All our garments are stained and torn--filthy rags, in fact, the Bible says. This is really a good piece. I enjoyed it.
I love your imagination, wonderful tear jerker and very true to life! Keep writing for the Lord!
What an excellent piece of writing. The story was heart-rending, and yet, familiar, and that makes it speak to individuals. Your writing was excellent, and your message clear. Kudos to you.
This is powerful. All I can say is WOW! Good job, well written and an excellent message. God bless!
A nicely written piece of a story within a story. Well done!
    It was given to her to clothe herself in fine linen, bright and clean; for the fine linen is the righteous acts of the saints ... 'Blessed are those who are invited to the marriage supper of the Lamb.' (Revelation 19:8-9 NAS)
This is a beautiful story. I think this allegory is a perfect read for everyone living in this harried world. It made me tremble. I struggle with self-esteem issues and could so relate to your MC. Though it may have been a tad week on topic, the perfect message and beautiful way that you told it counters that category. You pulled me in immediately and I could feel my heart thumping with every word. This is an outstanding story!