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This is a fun romance. I love that the little girl outted him!
This was so good! I loved this story. Funny, lighthearted and romantic. I can only hope they live happily ever after!

Thank you. It made my heart smile.

Blessings to you~
Really well done and an enjoyable read.
This was so much fun. I found myself rooting for these two by the end of the story. It flowed and held the right amount of suspense. And I think Rachel's part in the story was well placed (both in outting her father and it telling him earlier how she's take of him). This was so well put together. Great job!
This was so much fun to read! I absolutely enjoyed every line-definitely one of my favorites on this topic. Good job! God bless!
An enjoyable read. Your MC certainly did the right thing to be cautious when making friends on the Net.
Ha! What a fun, joyful read. I held my hand over my mouth for the entire second half of the piece. Great application of predicament.

I also enjoyed the Aussie influence.