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I enjoyed this story. I liked how you showed the change that people have when Christ enters our lives.

My only question is a theological one. I didn't think Jesus went to Hell for us but more as a sacrifice for our sins. The way it is written, I think some could get the idea that Jesus is in Hell for eternity.

You did a great job covering the topic. You did a nice job with the dialog and showing what the characters are about.
This was well written and certainly on topic. Nicely done. God Bless you.
Well done.

A nice inspirational fiction, not too preachy, and clear message. Characters stood out, were entertaining and likable.
What a sweet story! Thanks for sharing. God bless!