The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. There are some really good reminders here.

I felt this was a bit weak on topic.

Great job with this. I love the feelings conveyed.
This is lovely. I loved the quote at the end it really sent your message home.
Beautiful! Beautifully written and beautiful message and your title says it all! That we would ever thirst for more of God! Terrific job on this!
Beautifully done! Brava! I loved the depth and emotions this lovely poem invoked..I heard the writer's heart and cries for our Lord.

And, He is always there to waiting for His children to come back home. Loved it!

God Bless you~
Very open-hearted approach, almost in line with psalms 42-43, but I feel the quote from AW Tozer needs a clearer introduction - either through italics or perhaps through quotation marks.
Your phrases are exquisite and are only surpassed by your message.
Regardless of whether this entry was "on topic" or not, I feel the poem well-written and I enjoyed it very much. I can SO relate to the content.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Marlene K. Bonney