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This is lovely in its simple format, and powerful in its message. How often do we ignore the one "commenter" we should turn to? Your pacing and craft are excellent. Well done!
This brought tears to my eyes. I really liked how you showed how mean comments like Dan can break someone's spirit but God will carry us when we can't bear to walk.
So simple but yet so powerful...contrasting God's words with Dan's certainly shows the world's answers versus God's. Well done.
This was a brilliant entry. What a contrast of characters...and then the quintessential Being- God is there to pull it all together. Amazing job. I love it. God Bless~
You built this beautifully through a few replies as you dew us to that still small voice that corrodes our fears and builds hope on the inside. Very well done.
Chilling, with a powerful message. Excellent creativity.
Ahh Tim I've missed seeing your stories. You are so talented. I really liked this and think it will be at the top. BTW I always notice and care when you don't show up for a spell. You're my favorite bus dude! Hugs
This is really good. You gently unwrapped bits of the story and Dan's cruel responses - but God came through in the end.