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This is a poignant story. I have had patients with Schizophrenia, in all levels, and it is so sad. But God loves all His children. I really liked it, I felt the torment and anguished cries of that mother as she prayed. Nicely done. God Bless you~
Many are the afflictiobns of the righteous, but the Lord shall deliver him out of them all. Good writing.
Such a well written story, gripping, moving and impressive how you showed both mother and son just trying to deal with and make sense of life from their own perspectives of the illness. I am so glad God moved on Jan’s plea, persuading James to seek medical attention and leaving the story with hope for a happy ending. Great job, enjoyed the read!
This is lovely and a topic so many are embarrassed about. You did it justice. Congratulations for ranking 25th overall.