The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen. We should all desire this kind of earnestness. Nice work.
Beautifully said. Good job of bringing each "emotional event" to life as you tied it to the subject at hand. God bless you~
I need it; I want it; I must have it. I seek it with all my heart. Those two sentence spoke my heart. Wonderful poem.
Beautifully and wonderfully said and shone with powerful images, that earnest desire to please and serve God! Well done! A blessing to read!
You've painted such wonderful word pictures and you do it so effortlessly.
It's my heart's desire as well. Love this piece.
This really tugged at my heart for I too am seeking that kind of earnestness.

Congratulations for placing 11th in Masters and 16th overall.