The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice moment of reflection. May we all realize our seed potential in such a way!
I love moments like these. You painted the picture well.
This piece is well named - a snapshot of a moment - very lovely. I could sense Mel's amazement at the bright light of the moon away from city lights - you set the scene well.
I really enjoyed this. What a peaceful night. I had to laugh at: "She actually cast a distinct shadow," but then I really laughed when I read the next part--I am a country girl. :-D
Oh, how true, how true! A wonderful take on 'fruit'! This 'snapshot' is a blessing!
Hi Dave,
This is a wonderful use of words! Your writing conveyed a beautiful image in my mind, and I felt I was looking over the shoulder of your MC. Masterful writing!
Dave, after reading this, I feel I, as a FW reader, have been deprived of some insightful reflections from a gifted writer as you have not submitted in a while. I hope you consider sharing your work with us in the future. That aside, thank you for your input on my article, "Father Oliver, My Brother-in-Law". I appreciate your critique and hold it as valuable, much as Mel found truths illuminated in the moonlight of "A Shapshot" Thanks again and God bless, Loren