The Official Writing Challenge
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Poor Anton! Someone needs to remind him that God doesn’t think him a nothing! But I do believe he may have the beginnings of standing up for himself with that last line of not bothering to close the back of his gown! LOL LOL Entertaining read.
Should Anton have been more "patient?" Very descriptive, with a light touch of humour in all the chaos around him.
A story that carries through the mood of the MC very well. Good work.
This is a funny story and it made me giggle. Having been in the hospital so much I could relate to Anton's dilemma.

I'm not sure if the last line was the best one to leave the reader a mental picture of the MC's cheeks flapping in the breeze; but once again I giggled.

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