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I do love the story of David, and I enjoyed this retelling of it.

And as for David's comment,

"It was before the LORD I danced. I will play music before the Lord. And I will become even more undignified than this, and will be humble in my own sight."

I say, Rock On David, Rock On.
Very good informational piece about King David, as well as good story and good message about judging others actions.

I like how you point out how passionate David was, lots of people and churches could use some of that passion to wake them up! LOL Enjoyed the read.
Thanks for helping us see the many sides of this "man after God's heart."
This is a clear warning, with a touch of humour thrown in. I don't know about other readers, but some typo gremlin spoiled the effect of your message for me at times; as stray symbols seemed to be replacing quotation marks.
You did a great job with this retelling. You opened my eyes to things I didn't know or had forgotten The is the gift of an artful author.

Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 3!