The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/11
Good story and lesson. Thank you.
05/03/11
This is very good. I like the idea here and have often thought about writing from this man's pov myself. I really like the first three stanzas and would love to have seen you keep up that same structure throughout...I know that would have been difficult, but it was those three that drew me in to reading the piece and I kept expecting you to go back to it. Not that I'm criticizing what you ended up with - I just enjoyed how you started.

Good job.