The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I read such history between the lines of this poem. Whether you experienced loss too soon yourself or just saw others who did, you expressed it very well. May we all cherish what time we have, never knowing how long it will last.
Your poem is full of unaswered questions, just like life. I enjoyed reading it very much. Knowing all the answers could make life more painful that joyful. Thanks for sharing.
I cannot believe this piece did not garner more attention. I really liked it, Ben. You're an outstanding poet and I always enjoy reading what you enter each week.