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this was a bit too harrowing for me, you describe the raw emotions very clearly but i got a little lost in the chain of events. It was clearly something that had struck a chord in the heart and mind of the MC and it is clear there was a terrible murder but some of the details like the return of the glasses and the photograph of the bruises caused me confusion.
you seem to be describing an event that you think the reader will be familiar with but alas i am not.
Pam, I'm going to feature this article on the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 21. Look for it on the FaithWriters homepage--and congratulations!