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Topic: Once in a Blue Moon (01/06/11)
TITLE: Strange Encounter
By Marita Vandertogt
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She moved quickly toward the entrance and stopped long enough to button her coat. Just as she pulled the last button through the hole and took a step forward, she felt the hand on her shoulder. A big hand. It pulled her back. Her heart slammed against her rib cage making the buttoned coat a prison cell for a now panic stricken body.
“Excuse me,” she pulled her head up and turned to stare at the owner of the hand. It was a man, a few inches taller than her, with sandy blonde hair and the bluest eyes she had ever seen. He was a customer from what she could tell, not dressed in store clerk red and black.
“You really want to do that?” He whispered the words to her, letting go of her shoulder.
“What?” Her own blue eyes stared into his, softening at the smile lines around his.
“Hey,” he said. “I’m just trying to help. “ His eyes held hers in a gaze that kept her standing there, almost forgetting her mission. The blue of them melting some of the determination she felt for revenge against this place.
“You don’t understand,” she said, sensing some of the anger leave her body as she started to talk. “They owe me this, and more. I was treated very badly here.” Abigail felt the tears pushing at her throat again, her young body stiffening under the memory of the day they called her into the office. “Miss Smith,” the supervisor’s voice was stern, rehearsed. “We regret that .....” The words melted in her mind as his hand reached out and touched her shoulder once more. Why was she letting this man touch her, keep her there with his eyes. She felt a strange surge of warmth go through her thin frame. “Okay,” she said to him, her head down now, looking at the floor and not the compassion in his stare. She turned around and walked back toward the jewellery counter, slipped the bracelet off her wrist and placed it back on the counter top. Then walked again towards the door.
“Are you happy?” she started to say as she passed the place where the man still stood, waiting it seemed, just for her. “Well,” she said again. “Are you happy now? I put it back.” He didn’t answer, but patted her shoulder and looked at her with the warmth in his eyes again. “Thank you,” she whispered to him, as she started to leave, a strange sensation of peace sweeping back and forth across her heart at the thought of his eyes. All of a sudden there was no room for the anger, for the bitterness. Then a feeling of shock hit her at what she had almost done. The camera overhead would have captured every moment. She looked up into the monitor and saw she was standing alone, he was not beside her now. He was no where in sight. She wanted to thank him again, especially in light of the store cameras. This could have had a very bad ending.
Abigail pulled her coat around her and smiled as she left the store to go back out into the cold winter wind. What a strange encounter, she thought to herself as she stepped onto the bus and headed for home still basking in the warmth of his eyes. A warmth that melted away the events of the past few days, the injustice of a situation at work that should never have happened. That was probably a once in a lifetime encounter. Maybe she would see him again, but probably not.
“Thank you Lord,” she smiled a knowing smile and breathed a sigh of peace.
Hebrews 13:1 (NIV) “Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by so doing some people have entertained angels without knowing it.”
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