The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done! Enjoyed the playful use of technical jargon. :)
Your poem has a nice rhythm and says a lot about impulses. I like how you wove the emotions together with technology, and then brought it all back to God.
This is a lovely poem. Anyone who can rhyme etiquette with Internet is a genius in my book.

Light red ink- in the 3rd from last stanza the second to should be too.

This really is a beautiful piece of work. Poetry isn't always my favorite but your piece really touched me. Nicely done!
Fun read...I like how you were able to bring God into as well.
I note you acted on the "impulse" to include your title in every verse. While this could have made the poem 'repetitititive,' you have stepped over that problem and given us variety and insight, with a light touch. Well done.
Very creative poem;good flow and easy to read. Good use of the topic also.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 3 and 22nd overall!