The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What an awesome story for "think." God knows the thoughts of people when the doctor's and their monitors can't tell if there's any brain activity. Amazing job here!
"Doctors" that is. (I wrote "doctor's" above.) Oh well. :)
This is a touching story and I really enjoyed it. But I also know how important it is to donate organs it's a heatwrenching situation.
I loved this piece. It was written with poetic harmony, yet it was a story. It flowed beautifully, but with increasing intensity and I felt like I began in a patch of still water and then floated closer and closer, with increasing speed--to the rapids, coming dangerously close to the waterfall.

This is a story I could have wrote about my mother. I know from experience, those that appear brain dead, can hear and do shed tears. I saw it happen.

Great story.