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It's incredible how differently people can handle grief. Your story tugged at my heart and I'm glad it had a happy ending.
The Title of this story is exactly opposite of how this story affected me...for there were Many Tears as I read your story of love and of loss. Very well written, and hit the topic to a "T". Well done!
Tugged at my heart, your story did. I do know people like your Mum and how they suddenly break out of their seeming apathy. The story is well written and lucid. Bouquets!
In your first paragraph the MC says "My heart went out to her." Well, my heart went out to both the MC and her mother. Heartwrenching told in such beautiful detail. Well-crafted, good job!
Delayed grief is sometimes the hardest. You hit the feel target head-on. Beautiful story.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.