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It sounds like the MC is experiencing a terrible panic attack. I would love to know more about what caused her to hyperventilate and pass out. The scene on the mountain with God is beautiful. It felt like I was there too.
I was a little confused by this story, I didn't see it as a panic attack cause I used to have them and never saw anything "pretty" during them. I kind of took it as somoene who suffers from REM sleep disorder where you act out your dreams~ maybe going from one dream to another and accidently falling out of bed? Not too sure still trying to figure it out. It did keep my attention though