The Official Writing Challenge
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This is fun - I love the humour of this story. I was going to quote my favourite lines but there are too many. Great stuff!
Lots of tastes in this sweet story. I enjoyed the author's trip in memory.
I thoughly enjoyed your ethnic tale. Your heritage was rich with family and tastes. I've never heard of tasting the raw meat mixture.. but you seem to have survived it. :) Very nice work!
I'm sorry for the people not reading your story, because it's a treat! Such imagery, the way you added your ingredients (words), mixed them with your creative hands, tasted until it was just right--well, it was simply delicious.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.