The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely beautiful!!!
Your period setting is rich with detail. The mood created is tangible. Wonderful work on this historic account.
Wonderful atmosphere. Loved the unique angle of a monk. Excellent!
Excellent writing. You "showed" the MC's desire to write in so many ways--definitely out-of-the-box writing.
This was quite impressive. Your atmosphere, dialogue, inner thoughts of the MC--all so descriptive and evocative. The message was beautifully uplifting and I felt my spirit responding with praise as well. Thank you.
This is beautiful. There really isn't anything more to say. To glorify God in this way....
WOW and double WOW!
This was a performance indeed! Bravo!!!

I was internally twisted with torment for Brother Phelim before he discovered how to release his passionate praise to God and ABSOLUTELY LOVED the way you showed God's approval with the light.