The Official Writing Challenge
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Heehee! This was hilarious! I like this dragon-editing game--certainly very true to real life. Very fun to read and I love the fact that it was just between the dragon and the MC.

Very creative to have actual 'edits' throughout the story, a little annoying at first, but a cute touch. Thanks for sharing the laugh! ^_^
I enjoyed the fun and games with the dragon. I'm afraid that I haven't the foggiest what the introduction was about - golden girls and final prepositions? Sorry you lost me. More scaly beasty please!
I got the connection with the Golden Girls' scene and thought it a fun quirky introduction. All I can say about this entry is CLEVER - in all CAPS - CLEVER! Found myself giggling all the way through.