The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful job with the cadence and word choices to capture the feel of the time period. Lovely story!
Your "gifted quill" drew me into the scene. I was there. Great job.
I'm glad he came to his senses. I was worried there for a moment. Well done. I was on the edge of my chair.
Nice twist—so glad our hero saw the light in the end.
Enchanting, well-done, great plot, terrific ending, on topic-perfect!
Awe, so romantic. Love the end. Well done.
The title drew me into this tale of romance, and I was not disappointed. The dialog flowed nicely, and of course, I was applauding the happy ending. Good job.
Aww. Wonderful story! I love the ending (though I was a little concerned for a time.) :)
This is a really sweet romance story. The story drew me in and you created afew suspenceful moments. Well done!
I loved it! Wonderfully written.
Really well done. You got the full, intricate story into 750 words without straining, and wrapped it all up nicely.
Awesome! Great descriptions and sweet story.
Congratulations on being Highly Commended and receiving Editor's Choice, Joan!
Congratulations on your well-deserved placing!
I love this story, and I'm so glad Gregory had the good sense to make the right choice of ladies in the end. Congratulations!
Awesome. I am so proud of you. In my worly rush, of everyday life and care, for just a few minutes, you took my imagination away to another time and place. THAT was so refreshing! Thank you.
Fun! Loved this and the turn around at the end!
I am a sucker for the perfect love story--gets me every time.