The Official Writing Challenge
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Your description was dead on. I couldn't help but shiver and say ohhhh. It was entertaining from beginning to end. Boys sometimes you wonder if they will ever learn.
03/06/10
This story kept my interest from beginning to end. But then the "ending" disappointed me; I wanted them to have learned something - But then your "Title" came to mind and I understood..."Boys Will be Boys". (PS. Glad I was a girl child, (^.^). Well writen and an enjoyable, entertaining read.
This was told with such vivid description it makes me wonder if the author might just be one of those little boys all "growed up" now? ;) Such a cute story!
03/10/10
Ouch! I sure the boys will think twice before they try it a third time! :) This was fun to read with a good lesson. Now, I'm wondering if this is a true story? :)