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Mended is one of my favorite words, like grace. Something about being whole again.
I loved the life in this story and how you told it in a special way.
Beautiful and deep. Worth pondering a little more...

This is beautiful! Full of love and emotion, yet that little ache that comes along with life, and all the challenges and loss it can bring. I really could relate to this parent/ child scenario.
Beautiful story. The message of God's care for us like a father really came through clearly
Lovely illustration of grace and free-will. Ah, the courage in being a loving parent...
Wonderful descriptions! I really liked how you compared the father's love and care for his daughter to our heavenly Father. Perfect ending!
Beautifully and skillfully written. You left my heart aching yet joyful. Great work!!
Very good! I could relate very easily to his protectiveness for his daughter. I wondered what he was trying not to think about.
A well written story. What a great dad. I too wondered what dad was thinking about.