The Official Writing Challenge
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Your opening line (not to mention the title) grabbed me and kept me hooked through the whole fascinating tale.

I heard some great subtle messages woven in your story. Funny, descriptive and charming.

The ending left me wanting more. Good job!
Loved it! Giggled a lot, but got the message too. Well done.
Creative, humorous,and absolutely delightful! I think Marjee deserves her own series:)
Phee, I really got a kick out of this! I'm going to feature it in the Front Page showcase for the week of March 29. (I wish I'd read it before I told someone else I'd feature her for the week that contains St. Patrick's Day...). Anyway, look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Great story! You really preached without preaching. :) Glad I got to read this.
I so enjoyed this from the beginning to the very end. it was quite creative and I loved the tongue and cheek last line!
So enjoyed the imagination in this!