The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poignant, well written story brought many memories of my own mother. As the daughter of an alcoholic mother, I can relate to the feelings that you expressed so beautifully in this well-written piece.
I don't normally like emotional writing, but this I liked. I think it's the distant voice of the narrator. Comes across as convincing and realistic. Well done.
Needs a little tweaking here and there but overall a good piece.