The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job describing the elder woman's physical condition and also her emotional state. I was a little confused by the last paragraph...I don't think I understand the phrase "the yellow of His grace." Even so, the story itself was interesting and the relationship between these two intriguing.
This was indeed touching and well written. I relate to the relationship and the honesty.
Your story was touching, creative and very well written. It made me ache for Linda. Only one problem: you tacked on orange at the end and I couldn't see the connection. Good story though.
This had moments of great writing but at the end you leave the reader wondering what does the color orange have to do with anything. Keep writing.