The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story! I loved your "purple" names... :-)
Well, I've never heard of a Christmas beetle, but you've made me like them.

Very cute.
Extremely cute. Well written. Smooth. Great dialogue. And really fits the topic. Enjoyed it.
It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas ... On topic and in season with a fun to read story. Good writing.
Cute story, even though I am clueless as to what Christmas Bush is!
Terrific dialog and a cute story. I think you managed to get every synonym for purple in here.
emjoyed the dialogue. unique characters, all shades of purple.
Clever and cute with simply charming dialog...

I so enjoyed!
Creative use of the names and this had a touch of the child's fable, "The Ugly Duckling". Very entertaining.
This was a very sweet story. I loved the names you used for your characters. A great little story I could easily envision.
lol, cute!

I thought this line was especially funny:

"They were screaming like mosquitoes at the top of their lungs"

Good job!
Beautifully written story Chrissy. The different character encounters were wonderful. Great job!
Cleverly written. Spot on topic! Well done!
What a sweet story! I could just imagine this as a picture book. Loved it!
Cute! I loved all the fun characters.