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By Dusti (Bramlage) Zarse
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Releasing His crimson blood—
Lilac atonement
Said Purple to the LORD, his God and King,
O let me praise you with my amethyst!
Rise up, O purple mountains, chant and sing!
And, lilacs, with your petals thus dew-kissed,
Cry out your hymns of praise with flow’ry song!
O Laugh, hibiscus, lily, violet!
And, purple loosestrife, join the heav’nly throng,
Lest sunset with its lavender anklet,
Extol more boist’rously with praise than ye!
With joy’s delight, O LORD, sit back and know
Through undulations does the moonlit sea
So dance with purple-shadowed waves below,
Thus carving out for worship—Ocean’s Waltz!
How wondrously do purple shades exalt!
The water lily rises
It rises
It rises
The water lily rises
Through the murky pond.
To the sun it opens
It opens
It opens
To the sun it opens
Touched by sunlight’s wand.
In the eve it closes
It closes
It closes
In the eve it closes
Is this the resolution?
But soft! no, it emerges
Emerges
Emerges
But soft! no, it emerges
The picture of resurrection!
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I love too the way you totally changed the meter, the rythm and rhyme of the third section, which heralds a totally different emphasis and in a way the simplicity and almost starkness of the cross, of rebirth through God's resurrection power . Wonderful, wonderful poem. Well done.