The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the 'womb mates" (and I really do love them!) there were a few good puns woven into some descriptive story telling.

This brought tears to my eyes, bringing up emotions of all sorts. I was holding my breath during the hospital ride!

I know what "U of Dub" Hospital means and for those who don't it probably won't be a trip up, but I probably still would have used the proper name. But that's just me. :)
Great story...I'll admit to holding my breath as well. Relieved that the babies were okay.