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This brought tears to my realistically you portrayed your MC. Sad to think how many eight-year-old adults live this scenario every day of their little lives. Great writing.
Vivid, realistic writing with powerful emotions packed into this piece. Great job.
whoa, that was just too sad. It rings with truth which makes it even sadder. Good writing-- very believable!
Loved the last line about the surrogate mother. The only thing that seemed out of place was the line in parentheses. make sure to keep the POV flowing. It can be really hard, but it makes for a great story. A very sad story that was accurately portrayed...unfortunately, it's so prevalent in American society. Good job.