The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written. You bring out very powerfully the devious trickery and intrigue that surrounded this sad episode in the lives of David and Joab.
This ome has a lot of potential. I like the take on the story. Not to fond of the dialect used for this time period though. Good job.
Sorry, correction for *one*
Creative presentation of an intriguing Bible story. Good way to spell out details in a crisp, interesting format. I had a little trouble with the voices, switching back and forth kind of thing, but you separated it quite well with the font. Maybe just me :-) Liked the ending especially.