The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolute lovely descriptions. So vivid and perfect! You really made the setting come alive-- I can even smell the books in the book mobile and feel the cool shade of the elm tree!
My only critical comment is about the dialogue you use for Lilly. it has a 'way down south" flavor to it which caused a bump for me considering the location was the pacific northwest. Otherwise it is a great read with a terrific ending!
Loved this. What a good way to spend summer. Because I do not have the local knowledge to diferentiate between the flavours of speech and locations, it just felt real, and I could identify with both Lily and the driver. Keep the ink flowing. God bless you.
Excellent story. I could picture this really happening.
Loved the descriptions and the message. Writing seems to be your "fortay". LOL
YeeHaw!!! Congratulations dear Sister! Seeing your name up there is such a thrill for me. This was a terrific visit to the past. (gosh I miss the book mobile!!)
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! I love the unique subject. The quick visit here was most fun.