The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww! This could go a long way! I hope Nate and Joey become friends, it looks like it would be a great story that way! Neat job!
You did an excellent job with the contrasts in your story, and presented a good message as well.
Excellent portrayal of the two children, what separates them, what binds them together.
This was sad, each wanting what they thought the other had. The ending was very good, leaving it open for lots of possible interaction.
I enjoyed reading this story. A great reminder that sometimes "the grass can seem greener..." Thanks for sharing.